This weeks homework is to complete a 100 word challenge. You will be given a prompt and you are to write a story or paragraph that is only 100 words long. We have been practicing these in our classroom. Here is your prompt for this week.
The challenge this week is looking for you to use your senses. What will you see, hear, smell or touch? The prompt is:
… so as she lifted the lid…
Make sure you only write using this prompt. So your story has to have the above prompt sentence in it.
Here is an example of some students pieces of writing.
http://kidblog.org/Y6Gazelle/9d204287-147c-4f96-a025-44d3b689c44e/100wc-week34/
Batul held the treasure map in her trembling hands, smiling to herself. The chest was right in front of her, ready to be opened. She opened the chest slowly and carefully. Inside was a big, opaque container. Batul knew this was her only chance, so as she lifted the lid on top, a tingling sensation flew over her body. There was something incredible inside. It was a diamond ring, sparkling in the sunlight. Batul put it on gleefully thinking how lucky she was. However, what she didn’t know was the magic that was trapped inside…
http://kidblog.org/Y6Gazelle/1664539b-5b28-41fe-96f9-7d7d391bcc40/100-wc-week34/
Today I woke up late and went downstairs for breakfast and found some leftover pizza from yesterday and then stopped or it could be the left over pizza from last year but I didn’t know if it was the pizza or the left over pizza from last year. After a while I decided to put in the microwave and so as she lifted the lid and she was relieved it was the pizza. But wasn’t the only thing she had to worry about. Just after she finished the pizza she suddenly stopped and realised that where her parents are…….
Our Global Classroom 
One day Isaball was walking home from school and when I got home I felt hungry for some food
and when I opened the frig Isaball saw some pizza so as I lifted the lid it was all molldy and I did not now, so she put it in the microwave to heat it up and she ate. It the next day she was not feeling the best so she did not go to school and everyone was saying were is Isaball and her sister said why and the teacher said why do you still have it in your frig and Isaball said because we forgot to take it out .
I was bored and had nothing to do, it was raining I couldn’t go to Aaliyah my best friend’s house.
Mum said I should explore around the house. I said to her there is nowhere in this house I have not explored.
I took mums idea and went exploring. I went up the stairs past my room past my sister’s room turned left then turned right and I found a door I had never seen before.
I was scared what was in there? I opened the door very slowly and found boxes shelfs table’s books and toys. I walked around and found this box that said: Anastasia 3 years. …So as she lifted the lid… she found her old bear Tedled, her stuffed elephant Turps and all the toys she loved SO MUCH……..
“Sally can you take out the rubbish please,” yelled her mum from the kitchen. “Okay mum I will do it but James is doing it next time,” said Sally. She ran into the kitchen, grabbed the rubbish bag and ran outside closing the laundry door behind her. She went out to the rubbish bins which are near the mail box and so as she lifted the lid to the bin she saw spiders crawling out of the bin. There were all types of spiders including huntsman’s, red backs, black widows and wolf spiders. They crawled everywhere around her and bit her arm. Then her dad came home and took her to the hospital.
I am very sorry mrs Joyce miss browns blog wasn’t working ill put it on my blog as soon as I get out of piano. and please delete this after
smash clam boom the sound of something was coming out from our roof we went up to investigate but there was nothing there apart from a partly burnt photo that looked like me at this time I didn’t know what to think I was to scared to even move. mum and dad didn’t hear it and nether did my sister meg who was snoring by this time I quickly sprinted towards the door and just before I shut the door I realised the window was open but when I walked in to see what was there, there was no window. I was too scared to go and close it and just went straight to bed I couldn’t sleep the hole night due to noises keeping me awake. in the morning when I got up I went upstairs to see if the unknown thing was there to show this time mum asked what I was doing up so early and looking in the addeck so I showed her the photo and told her what had happened, and surprisingly she actually believed me. and in the afternoon when I got home I had voices in my head saying go to the addeck over and over so I went up stairs hoping this would be the last time and as I reached the addeck I had second thoughts to wether I should do it but I did because I wanted this over and done with so I reached for the door opend it and inside was an evil spirit that had been haunting me and it was the one that was at my hospital when my sister meg was borne and who separated me and my family from our very close friends. so I ran down stairs grabbed mum dad meg and told them to get out of the house this minuet and sure enough the spirit was coming down stairs but couldn’t leave the house so we could get away. and that was the story of my abandon home. “wow that was great did that really happen” I haven’t moved before for any reason but I think that there are way to many houses abandon per year I’m going to find out the reason behind all abandon buildings and see if I can help. there is one mysterious house I walk past every day that would be great to find the history behind. so off Annas friend went going to find the history behind her first house and as soon as she finished there was a sale offer and the house was as good as new and from then on anna the girl who had a bad history with her house her best friend was the person to save abandon houses.
the end…
after tomorow
I am sorry mrs joyce I have posted it onto miss browns blog now
So you can get rid of it😄😄😄
I was asleep and splash boom a wave very large went all over the deck. I went back to sleep but I woke up on a strange island it was mysterious. I heard the bushes shake and I made a hut to keep me safe. Through the night I was very hungry indeed. I climbed a tree and picked some bananas. Mm I said but some peaceful waves driffed me to sleep. When I woke up I opened my eyes and said to myself I’m in my room it must of been a strange mysterious dream. I heard mum calling, “Elizabeth wake up time for breakfast”. I came rushing down the stairs and said to mum ” that was the strangest dream”. I smelled something delishus, “What is for breakfast mum?” As she lifed the lid of the frying pan Elizabeth saw pancakes. “My faverite thanks mum”.
Fantastic!
I woke up in the middle of the night and than I hoped out of my bed and I went down the stairs and than I saw a box in my way and I nearly tripped over the box and than I saw a word on the box saying: Fragil and scary in the box. So after I went to open the box I did than something really humungus scary looking magical monster that made me scream really loud and than I could smell something burning in my mums house and than I walked into the kitchen and than the thing that cought my eye was a fire and the whole stove blew up into flames and than I got the blame for it from my mum.
One windy day When the windows where open A magical box flew through the window. Jack and Aslan and there sister oliva where in the living room watching there favourite show Abra Kadabra. It was there most show in the world it was at a wonderful place it was so amizing that they where crying
Oh said Jack where did this box come from? It the most beautiful box I’ve ever seen said Olivia as she lifed the lid she was amazed at what she sore it was some tickets to meet the Magician of the show Abra Kadabra. This was going to be amazing Aslan said..
I was asleep as I woke up I saw the most crazy box flew in my window voice in my head were saying to open the box my mum was still asleep so I didn’t know what told me to tuch the Box because when I did I disappeared. Where am I I said. I looked around and I found a cafe. In the cafe was a seat. On the seat was a box. It looked like the same box she saw before. As she opened the lid she found her self back in her room in her cosy warm bed.
I was riding a roller coaster. The ride is finished, finally. I catch my stomach as the bar holding me releases me. “Few.” The cage opened I get out. I’m still dizzy I feel like I’m gonna hurl. My mum has fairy floss in a plastic container as I open the lid a bunch of bubbly chemicals spurt and spit at me, April fools my sisters say jumping from behind the pram. I go on another ride. I spin when I get off. This time my mum brings me fairy floss on a stick. Sorry about before darling. Enjoy.
The girl was running down the hill she forgot to get her homework so she has to go back to school and come back home befor 8:00 and it was only 7:00 so I turned left towards Eyeclap street and there was her school so quickly went in but the door was locked and when she thought all hope was lost she found her homework on the step so she got it and quickly ran back and it was only 7:40 so she turned and she saw a jar so as she lifted the lid she diserperd
I was asleep on a terrible rainy day when I woke up Big Bang!!! Came to the window I ran out of my room and straight to my mum is everything all right mum yes sit breakfast is almost ready said as she lifted the lid of the butter i love your coking mum.
Bang!!!!!! I started to cry what is that mum I don’t even have a 1. clue
I just want to go out the back to see what it is
When I get to the door there was bricks on the ground.
Hallo said my dad the shed has failed to stand up.
So I went back to sleep and never said anything again.
One mysterious day there was a girl named Jade she is a sea diver. Once she found a under water city from the 80’s, she also found a watch tower and there was a lid/trap door as she lifted the lid….
There was a hole so Jade went down the hole as her oxygen tank was running out OUCH!!! Help, help
Jade is stuck in a very old trap snap the trap broke and Jade escaped and went to shore wow what a mysterious day.
Joshes mum Arived quick.Then be quick she’s in a hurry. I smelt chocolate when I walked out of the door. I rushed down the driveway and to the car, I asked if Joshes mum had chocolates. Joshes mum said here, have some if you want. I saw the chocolate that wasn’t in the box. I heard Joshes mums teeth crack through the chocolate, as soon as I reached the door of the house I opened it and rushed to my room. I saw the box, grabbed the keys and unlocked the box,so as I lifted the lid nothing was there. Before school everything was in the box.
YAY!
Wana play again?
Brin it on!
ON YOUR MARKS, GET SET, GO!!!
Rrrrrrrr…..
Nether of us are first.
1 minute left!
FINISH!
Rrrrrr, you came fifth and I came seventh.
Rattle, ratlle
Hear that?
It’s coming from the kitchen!
Look it’s in that tin, WAIT mum said don’t go in there!
At night come into the kitchen and take it into our treehouse.
COC-A-DOODLE-DO!!!!!! (Morning)
Lets go into the treehouse.
As she lifted the lid……
There was a big scream.
What was that?
Let’s go see.
What’s the matter Mum?
I’ve lost my tin with something in it…..
It was Lizes 9th birthday party she was over excited. She invited all her friends and she can not wait for her present. There are 19 people there. She had all the party food with the other people. Then she had the cake and she said that cake was yummy cake. Finally it is present time. She was at the last one. As she lifted the lid she saw her favourite Thing was there a p.s.3 and she was so happy.she said that is the best thing ever.
Wan day as Sale wok up I sar a tub so as she lifed the lid she sar a tub of food sale wanded wot to do
With the food sale sad shud I salit ar cepit so she want to berd to tak a slep she had a drawm she wok
Arp at a scool it had heps of tres in the scool then ther wos a chlo wot cam in frunt of sale she wos
Sgard the tlol shod sale arud the scool then at nit she wok up bak home She cam dan stars and she
Dsited to kep the food.
In the morning my mum cook some food for me
I got ready for school. In school they have weird
food they were tentercols only .when it’s home
Time .I went to the bus they were zombies in
The bus. I went to my room I said AAAAAAY!!!!!
There is a zombie in my room my dad said I will
Help he killed the zombies.
One day 2 adventures named Finn and jake Finn has a sword and jake had stretchy powers
They went to slay a monster and they Went back to the tree house
With bemo they were playing video games and they were inturuupted by the ice king
He drop a chest and they were about to see what was inside it but the scorcher took it then Finn had an idea he went to a spiritual flame he wanted flame protecter there wish was granted and they turned all bluet hey when’s to the flame Kingdom and got flame princess the went to catch the scorcher they told flame princess to put him down flame princess did he tripped over and we got the chest as fire princess did as she lifted the lid it was a wish she wished she was as powerful as her dad and she was now she can always beat her fdad
I was on my way to comic con and was luffy i lifted the lid i was exnted to see the power
rangers toys. the tv was on and one piece was on tv i love this show and i was on my
way home and fell asleep .